by omanahan88
Just because I’m trying to be more active about reviewing things, I’ll repeat what I said over on the old site.
I really appreciate you taking a swing at content you don’t typically jive with. I know for me, writing is 10000000% easier when I’m into what I’m writing. Basically every growth story I’ve ever written has required some serious mental focus to buckle down and get the damn thing done.
And I think you did a terrific job here. What I love about cruel/humiliation content is getting to watch that slow descent into despair. It starts with pleading, a rational argument about why they can’t do this to someone, why the smol can be trusted not to say anything if they’re freed, etc. And then it ends with them being forced to face the realization that there’s no going back to normal, this is just what life is now. And then to find out that even when you’re at rock bottom, there’s still some way to sink even further into the cracks? Love it. Awesome work!!