Review by McDead
This is a pretty fun story! I appreciate that it's reserved on the erotica side of things, and converse are certainly pretty footwear. The one big criticism I'd have is that I'm not entirely sure why she's fighting gods specifically? As in, the armies simply act like normal humans would. I feel like the unique setpiece isn't really taken advantage of in way it could have been. Still! I do love me some big steppy, so I enjoyed reading it ^^ excited to see what you make next!
Oh you're definitely right, yeah. I feel like I skipped over a lot of backstory on the gods, titans, and the mortal as well. Part of the reason why is mainly just that I was just scrambling to write a mood I was in. At that point in time, I was WAYYYY too excited to get to the parts where she's putting down their armies like nothing.
I'd really like to give this story another shot, with a lot more depth next time. Thanks for the review!~