Review by Diccard
You paint a beautifully idyllic picture of domestic life with a reality-bending lady. Lovely read and very cute. The thought and concern sorrunding hos agency also really helps convey a sense of these being real people in a relationship. Strangely heartwarming.
It's captivating also to see the reality bending manifest too in how everything is connected. The shift from the car to his thoughts to her overbearing presence, the switch from the sight of her on the bed to her lips on the sky. Good stuff
Review by TerryLarka
That was a fun read! I really enjoyed Brianna's character and all the different ways she toyed with Adrian and reality itself. From her holding the world to her chest, to her erasing time itself, all the disorienting effects she had on Adrian as he headed home, to that cataclysmic kiss at the end, there were some really cool ideas throughout the story. I particularly liked her shrinking the island they had their honeymoon on and keeping it on her wedding ring; how sweet, and just the kind of wholesome antics I'd expect from a loving, omnipotent spouse lol.