Review by Gokuto7
I’m really liking the sweetness of their relationship so far. If I had one minor issue it’s that Zoe is a little too much of a scaredy cat, but other that that this story is great. I would love to perhaps have a section from Laurens’s perspective talking about Zoe
I don't think I'd be able to write a real perspective from Laurene, she is too different from us ! But I'm working to show her positive impact on Zoe and how she's slowly getting out of her scaredy cat personnality to rekindle her more fiery behaviour !
Stay tuned for more chapters, I think we're roughly halfway through the story right now.
Also, thanks a lot for the review, it really means a lot !
Review by CaliTea
Here is your review, ya filthy animal! *gunshots*
La pauvre Zoe va vivre une sacrée aventure.
I think my favourite part was the exploration of the impact Godlings have had on society. Zoe’s dilemma with Miss Beck… uhem… Lauren is still very fun though, and I’m excited to see what fate has in store for her.
Yeah ! Thanks for the review, it means a lot !
The worldbuilding is still ongoing because I've already playing around with some sequel ideas and I want to use more of the 29 other Godlings !
But let's not rush, I know how I want to end this story at least, so I'm confident I know what I can write now ! Also I just really like the idea of exploring what happens when God is basically really into you and insanely horny !
There is some more chapters already written, but I'll release one only when another one is written. I can tell the two MC will continue their strange (but hopefully wholesome!) relationship !