A Night at the Tavern Reviews:

Review by Randomguywhosthere

A very simple and fun story overall.
The first two prey being eaten unintentionally, only for the catgirl to intentionally eat the last one is a fun dynamic. The pixies really didn't stand a chance.
My only critique is that the potion Gryg threw into Elyse's mouth to make her sick isn't ever mentioned again, not even referring to it not working or some minor effect it creates instead of working as intended.
I love the ending, with the contrast between the despair of the trio is Elyse's stomach vs her not even remembering them when she wakes up. It's a contrast between the perspectives of predator and prey that is always nice to see in vore stories.

Added: 04/04/2025
Updated: 04/06/2025
Author Reply:

Thanks for the feedback man, I appreciate it and I'm glad that you liked the story! I'm striving to get even better.

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