Just a Sylvia Vore Story Reviews:

Short and sweet! I do love a good playful+cruel story and it's not often I can get into a rampage but I like the tiny POV here which I think works well. I was almost starting to feel like we were watching a main character the way the descriptions made it seem like they were important or special, all the more to the despair when they were not. I think I would have preferred some more mouthplay before the swallow but in such a short time you handle the payoff well. I think it makes sense that Sylvia is the real main character, as the reader is drawn to understanding more of what she's about. If this was an advertisement for more of her, it's a good one! Well done <3

Really neat little vignette! The stomach scene kind of reminded me of the scene in "Nope" where there's the internal shot of Jean Jacket swallowing the people it was supposed to be displayed too. I could practically hear the wailing and crying of people smashed on top of each other in your girl's belly, "filled to the brim" as it was. A regular Bosch-ian hellpit of a scene~ :3

A little detail I really liked was the person bashing their head on the window. As a 6'1 woman I FELT that in my soul; it's bad enough smashing into a low steel doorway with my own weight and forward momentum, but with the force of a giantess lifting you behind it, the impact must have been absolutely skull cracking >~<

Thanks so much for being a pioneer on the site, and a warm welcome from the SizeFiction community! Excited to see more of your work <3