Review by Diccard
Fun! All this hubbub around dodging big yellow energy balls and the significance of Aisha gets you this sense she might just pinch it... and then everything falls apart so quickly the poor lady doesn't even have time to comprehend it. The "disjointed" ending works well, like she was in shock and cold not comprehend she was going to die. Fun!
also please release my family, i did everything you asked :( :) :( :p
Review by Sunny
YES!!!
Military size fics were the first types of stories I ever wrote. Most are lost to time (on my Windows 8 laptop hard drive on the other side of the country in storage), but they were my first foray into creating for this genre! It's cool to see someone write one that's actually competent. The giant's powers are so cool too, it's almost like a boss in a video game where you have to slowly discover their move set. But obviously Aisha, Ray, Eric, and Captain don't exactly get a respawn lol.
Kinda has me thinking on revisiting as mil-size story at some point with my long improved skills, and a lot of inspiration from people talking about that stuff recently. A lot of crazy aeronautic tech has come out in the past few years as well, and I think a supermaneuverable, supersonic capable VTOL fighter vs a giantess might actually be a fight with stakes for both parties!
That ending fuckin GOT me, and I love it. Straight up hardcore <3
Oh yeah, you're right you have the perfect kind of knowledge to make a cool military fic! Honestly I LOVE it when opposing humans in giantess stories actually put up a fight, whether they're successful or not. I feel like it isn't touched on nearly as much as it should be.
Thank you so much for reading my story!