Review by McDead
This was really well written! The language used is incredibly poignant, and I really liked the little scene of the demon commander spitting in the goddess' face, I think she deserved that. I also really like the idea that normal mortals were vaporised by her aura before she could crush them, and that that got on her nerves. Really creative!
The one criticism I'd have is that I wish we got a better idea of the larger situation. Why did mortals fight on their own against demons? Why was Liel supposed to wait and observe? Why couldn't the gods fight their own battles, or if they're so strong, why did defeating the demon armies matter at all? I think answering some of these questions could have made Liel's perspective and frustration a bit more clear.
Either way, great work! Fun read! :D
A valid criticism to have, and honestly something I'll likely expand on in future stories. I quite like this setting, so the chances of me coming back to add more to it are pretty good. Still glad you liked the story though. Even murderous angels need some love every now and then.