Review by Sunny
Aw, this one was sad! qwq
I really enjoyed the concept of the story; I'm a sucker for smols going out from their safe little homes into the wilds for adventure! The weird fog forest was really cool, and I really liked the red eyed creature.
Junana was really neat, and the trope of "it's easier to just kill you than go through the paperwork to keep you alive" is always a screwed up, sexy one.
Pixies losing their wings is something that always tugs at my heartstrings, so that being a central focus of their early digestion was definitely a bit of a tear jerker for me. It was really sad, but at least they had each other, right? <3
Excited to see how your prose evolves and changes as I keep an eye on your work going forward! Great work~ :3
I'm happy you liked it! I'm still on a journey of self-improvement and I hope my prose shall improve as time goes on :)