Borrowed Reviews:

This was a lot of fun! I was surprised to read the twists and turns, and it was interesting to see a good poetic structure also carry a sizey narrative structure. Poems like this are why I added the poetry genre tag, it's brand new! Thank you for sharing <3

Reposting my review from GW:

I've never read a size poem before, and this is really cool! Your word choice is excellent, describing so much with so few. And the plot itself is very cute.