Comforts of Fantasy Reviews:

Wow, chapter 2 is great, but it still seems like a lot of setup. Doesn't Adriana need to drink water? I think the human body can go 3 days without water. Can't wait for the real action to start, hopefully in chapter 3! Gotta get some smut going!

Your way of emphasizing her size, each description of what the tiny feels in her presence and how it translates to his size, the playful language that fits with each character... this is insanely good.

and since we're both specialized in IT stuff lol... your usage of that knowledge didn't go beyond unnecessary details but stayed perfectly in the middle while remaining accurate. I love it, it's well balanced.

as for chapter 2 itself... the description of how she was just a girl who had a crush on Riley really sells it. Reminding the readers too how she was just a normal girl before this whole thing happened. Also, really love her whole stuttered thing, it's so cute!

the show don't tell here also really strong here when Riley observed her room and checked out various stuff that could describe Sadie really well. Also, why I can imagine that raw-looking shady website perfectly? lol

and that Adriana reveal is fuckin' HOT!

Please continue this! well done!

This is a story I read a while back that I was really hoping for updates on. I really enjoyed the setup here, and you never added to it. Please consider coming back this story!