Review by ProbablyIX
(Copied over my GiantessWorld review <3)
This story is lovely, I'm so glad I read it.
The main dynamic between Lisa and Trish is really sweet, and you strike a great balance between horny and heartwarming.
Trish was a lot of fun to read, especially spotting all the fun little references to anime and games. And who doesn't love a big girl who stinks good? Jokes aside, I think you did a pretty good and respectful job of portraying her, particularly her anxiety when they leave the house.
As a trans woman who would also love to be tiny and at the mercy of a hungry significant other, it's safe to say I really resonated with Lisa's character lmao. It's always great to see transfemme characters, especially in the tiny role, and I think you did a great job with depicting her. Her and Trish's relationship is really sweet, I love the way they support each other.
I quite enjoy your take on shrinking too! It's a neat world you've set up, and I liked the little details about it, like Lisa needing to communicate via a phone, and the restaurant talking about tiny accommodations. I really like how you approach the fact that someone like Lisa would definitely see the silver lining of a shrinking disease. Oh, and Lisa having a tiny bike was a really fun idea. I'm surprised I haven't read it in more stories, it makes so much sense.
Really well done, and I'm excited to read whatever these two get up to next!