by CaliTea
This story is superb! I loved the three-dimensional characterization of both Tess and Amy. Tess being an absolute sadist, but still ultimately deep down respectful and conscientious of her power over Amy; while Amy, to the onlooker, is cute and timid, but within almost more depraved than her large "friend."
The dialogue is outstanding!! It flows so well and paints such a clear picture of what's going on without even needing to show the actions, details, or specifics.
Incredibly for more ^^
Thank you so much! I think the dialogue is what I've been focused on the most for this one. I really want the characters to shine, and I worry sometimes I write too much "action" where characterization could make things better. I'm really glad you like it, and I appreciate your insight in helping me flesh out the deeper elements of vore and despair and love and where all of those intersect. I hope to pick up the next chapter very soon! <3
by 9BillionPuppyGirls
I love this so much. You expressed how it feels to be into cruel stuff perfectly. I love the main character's and Amy J's dynamic so far!
So glad you liked it! I need to get around to uploading more and more of it, there's a lot to be added over from GW. Stay tuned! <3