Heather's Heist Reviews:

Even if this story was not a piece of size fiction, it would still serve as an excellent piece of fantasy writing. Fortunately, we are blessed not to have to choose between the two, because Heather's Heist delivers in both areas! I've had the privilege of reading this story in its entirety in advance, and so I thought I'd use that insider knowledge to assure any reader who may be on the fence about starting this story or continuing onward, that the tale is well worth investing your time and attention to. The setting feels incredibly lived-in and the characters are written with more than enough nuance to engender attachment and interest. I would love to go into a deeper analysis, but to say more would be a spoiler and a disservice to the finely crafted plot. A rich meal has been set before you, and I implore you to dig in. You will not leave the table unsatisfied.

Chapter 5 Review

Larissa almost speaks correct French ! Neat !

Also, not sure what happened to Ren, or how or when. But well deserved. And I find you made the giantess sorceress even more frightening than Anna, because she feels like a gentle someone that will nonetheless wipe you out.

Truly this story is a masterpiece.

Really honored to have been one of the early readers for this masterpiece! I think you do an excellent job with scale and stakes, and you have the smols actually doing something other than New Objective: Survive, though there is plenty of that too <3

In a very short time you're able to communicate distinct characters and motivations, which is absolutely necessary for an ensemble cast. It's no small feat to characterize and humanize and conclude characters in a cohesive story, let alone in a way that is blazingly hot.

Equal parts love and despair, which is right to the core of my personal tastes but are some of the more challenging things to blend together. I think those who want love stories don't often appreciate seeing them melt away and those who appreciate being melted don't often have the moxy to include a love story.

Excellent work. These are the kinds of stories that instill a kind of sweet sadness and heartache, the kind that stays with the reader for long after they're done. It hurts so good. Well done.

Chapter 4 Review

Nooooooooooo !
Mabel T-T ! Ada !!!

Why do this, Cali ! Why destroy my heart ! Heather better survive I tell you.

Anna was incredible as that monstrous force, barely comprehensible for the humans I guess. And that digestion scene. I usually don't like Vore and Digestion, but here it doesn't feel like smut, but rather an important element of the story.

It was always extremely well written, and I really like how you did this. I guess that's the proof of your mastery of the English language, well done !

Chapter 3 review :

Well, the first comeuppance has come, to a druglord if I'm not mistaken. Well done humanizing Ged by the way ! He seemed way less of a bastard here than before. It makes his fate much more gruesome.

Heather's plan was a little risky, in her place I'd have dropped the explosive on the other two on the rope, frankly. I do wonder what'll happen now, as I guess Anna will have noticed her.

Chapter 2 :

Le groupe vit bien.

Ged and Ren seems like they are absolute assholes, and I hope they'll get what they deserve before the end. Especially Ren, Ged sounds like a goon, she looks like a powerful monster.

Adelaide and Mabel are gentler but I can’t help but feel they are hiding something too. But then again, so does Haether !

Overall, Anna was simply spectucular. And she was sleeping all along ! That was really an awesome way to depict her monstrous size, which is truly tremendous it seems. And she hasn't really been standing or even moving for now...

See you next chapter !