Special Request (Redux) by IronicallyTall

Andrew has a falling out with his fiancé, who doesn't understand his sympathies for tiny people. He leaves to stay with his would-be mother-in-law Dana with the hopes he can enlist her help. Instead, he discovers Dana's twisted second life. She swallows tinies for cash! Now Andrew has to avoid getting wrapped up in the next request!

Story Notes:

This was originally uploaded to GW as an incest story - a commission from MEs0v3r31gn

The story caught the attention of a prolific 3d artist - EldritchGTS:

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A new version of the story without incest was written (this version) 

EldritchGTS created a phenomenal series of renders for the story

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Rated: ⚫ - Xtreme Sexual Themes/Violence | Reviews: 1 | Table of Contents
F/f Age 18-24 Age 35-54 F/m Dystopia Size Society Playful Shrink Mistaken Identity Mouth Play MILF Embarrassment Age Gap Instant Size Change Vore Humiliation Digestion Indifference Regret Cum Degradation Gore Hardcore Cruel Rape Mind Break Violent Despair Torture Nonconsenting Fatal

Diabolical Dana

Word Count: 1990
Added: 03/25/2025
Updated: 04/05/2025

Andrew walked around the corner to see the apartment building he’d visited many times previously. He hefted his large duffle bag over his shoulder, enough clothes for a weekend away. He knew Dana was home by her new Prius parked on the street outside. As he crossed the street, he passed several wooden telephone poles along the sidewalk. Some had outdated music events, while others had college tutor courses. He noticed several prominent 'MISSING' posters, with a ruler in the photos next to the little people. It looked like most of them were outdated as well, probably put up by a shrink outreach group. Andrew sighed and continued on. It was frustrating living in a world with so much sadness, and worse so that his fiance didn’t understand. He was still heated from the argument.


They were supposed to go to her mom’s this weekend but now they needed some space. Andrew had grown close to Dana in his time dating Bianca. He used to stop by and visit often, in their first years of dating. He had his first kiss with Bianca as they snuck away from a thanksgiving party, hidden in her room. He was in love with Bianca, and excited to call Dana family. She was a single mother with a bad case of empty nest ever since Andrew and Bianca moved in together. She was always kind to Andrew, and she also understood about the epidemic of missing tinies.


Andrew stopped to take a tentative look into one of the apartment windows from the street. He knew her group of windows from the many others in the building. The lights were on, but he didn’t see her. He walked by her Prius, and saw Bianca’s school alumni stickers adorning the bumper. Once at the door, he noticed Dana had purchased one of those tiny homes for charity. Apparently lost tinies could walk into them wherever someone has set one up and then you'll get a notification for help. The idea was pretty cool, and the Kickstarter went crazy last year. But Andrew couldn't remember any success stories from them. It was nice that she was trying to help, she was always caring. She understood, and would hopefully help convince Bianca why he needed to pick up some volunteer hours. She would be disappointed it was only him for the weekend, but it wasn’t the first time he used her place to give Bianca some space. It had been a while since he last visited, and it would be good to catch up.


Andrew knocked, but there was no answer. The doorbell was still busted, as several short jabs into the button confirmed. He gently pried up the potted fern behind the tiny house and found the spare key. With a quiet 'click' he pushed the door open. He wasn't sure how to break the news that he and her daughter were in another fight. Once inside, he heard the faint din of water coming from the bedroom. She was in the shower, probably not quite expecting him so soon. Oh well. Andrew went to the guest bedroom and dropped his duffle bag, gently closing the door. He stood for a moment to appreciate the memories. This is where he and Bianca fell in love. Now it served as a guest bedroom, some family pictures were the only reminders that it used to belong to Bianca. He stashed the duffel bag near the bed and walked back into the hallway, closing the door behind him.


He walked through the apartment, enjoying the fancy new furniture. Dana seemed to have redecorated, all the old furniture he remembered had been converted to mid-century modern. She seemed to be doing quite well for herself, which he was glad to see. The shower was still going and he knew there was likely a long time to sit around. He peeked around the apartment, peering into the office.


The office door was open. To his surprise, there was still a bed. He assumed Dana would have made some space for yoga next to the desk or something, but she'd made basically a whole third bedroom with brand-new furniture. What was more strange was her usual photo-editing office equipment had grown substantially. He could scarcely count the different cameras, tripods, and circle lights. He even saw a green screen near the wall. He strode into the office to admire the equipment.


"Damn, Dana. Get it." He congratulated her under his breath, nodding to himself.


She'd always been talented with editing but this was a full studio. She must have really hit it off, and the new furniture was a testament to that. He wondered if she was still getting her tiny-district real estate license or if she'd gone full-time with photography. He walked to the desk to find an expensive laptop connected to various wires leading to all manner of peripheral devices. He bent over and found an open video editing application, with many overlays and extras added to the active scene. Last semester, he had been in an Intro to Digital Media class and could recognize the basics but this was beyond him. 


Curiosity took hold and he fiddled with the mouse to locate the play button. She probably had a little while, and it’s not like she would mind. Dana was an open book. Just like his fiance. He selected the >from beginning option and watched a short well-produced intro graphic fade in. He maximized the window and took a seat. He smiled, glad that Dana was pursuing an artistic outlet. The words 'Diabolical Dana' flashed by in girly pink font, with a lipstick mark for both the dotted i's. Andrew chuckled. Dana was the furthest from diabolical. She cried during every movie and refused to watch those 'Save the Tinies' commercials with the sad music. Her version of diabolical is tricking Andrew into eating spicy food as a joke.


The words faded, and Dana faded in. She was sitting on the bed, in this very room, probably rather recently. Andrew looked around to find the camera that was used, one of many on the desk all pointed at the bed. She was wearing a simple robe, one she usually used for evening lounging. Andrew's face turned red as he pieced it together. The robe, the bed, the cameras. The cutesy intro graphic. His jaw dropped but his curiosity overrode the shock.


"Hey little ones," The video began, Dana using an extra sultry voice, "it's been a while. I was sooo happy we hit two hundred with that last live and you know what that means?" She picked up the camera from the tripod, the view shaking and rotating as she lifted it to her face, "That's right. I have an extra special treat for you."


Andrew was ready to look away at any moment, not wanting to see too much but at least needing to know what sort of videos Dana was filming in her spare time. He felt a little ashamed, knowing that his attraction to his fiance carried over to his soon-to-be mother-in-law. He could still hear the shower running across the hall. If he was quick, a little peek couldn’t hurt. Dana’s close-up face held a mock surprise for the camera during a drumroll audio she added. After a moment, her hand appeared from just below frame. Slowly her dainty fingers rose, and pinched between her thumb and forefinger was a naked tiny woman.


"Or, should I say, a treat for me?" She smiled, letting out a little giggle to the camera as the woman kicked and screamed. Her audio was barely perceptible, drowned out by the strange laugh coming from Dana.


"The fuck?" Andrew sat dumbfounded. Was this some kind of avant-garde thing? He watched as Dana's giggle opened up, her mouth hanging wide as the sound rolled out. Her tongue emerged, and in the HD detail, he could see tears from the tiny woman landing on her chin. She stretched her tongue out, pink and glistening. Her giggle turned to moans as she pressed the woman into her tongue, her eyes locked to the recording screen to watch the action. The kicking and squirming escalated, and Andrew swiveled the chair to look away.


The bed was right there, and he noticed a slight divet where she must have been sitting. This happened... just now. He couldn't bear to watch as he stared out to the hallway, listening to the shower. Was this some kind of horror production? The tiny was really leaving it all on the screen but... it seemed too real. Then there was the erotic context. He knew things like this happened but Dana?? This had to be some kind of special film project or a weird request from a weirder tiny. He guessed the woman maybe paid top dollar for that kind of thing. It wasn't unheard of, and he's had his share of tiny classmates hitting on him. His mind was racing as the video continued to play behind him.


"Awwwwww," Dana cooed, and sucked her lips making a slurping sound. The screams of the tiny woman rose and fell in the cacophony of mouth noises. Andrew's face was red, having already seen too much and now listening to Dana make seductive moans while she fellated this... client? He tried to rationalize that in this economy it wasn't the worst you could do. Dana was the kind of person who would want to help people realize that fantasy, and what's one french kiss for two hundred dollars? Plus it kinda makes sense, to have gigantic soft lips wrap around your body. To slide along someone's tongue. Andrew grew more red, finding that the moans and wet noises were stirring something within him. She was an attractive woman, and he was excited to grow old with Bianca knowing what her future might look like. But this was wrong.


"Well I think that's all this one can handle, everyone say goodbye~" Dana's sing-song voice came back to close the video.


Andrew turned back to face the screen, ready to set things back the way he'd found them to avoid detection. This would just be a weird little secret he'd never talk about. Not to Dana and certainly not to Bianca. He expected Dana to sign off, her fancy graphic fading in as she waved. Instead, the frame was entirely filled by her waiting mouth. Her tongue quivered and her throat undulated behind a clearly exhausted little woman. She was no longer screaming, a hollow distant look in her eyes. Then Dana dropped her inside, the camera lowering even closer as her teeth must have touched the lens. Andrew's eyes were locked on the tiny woman's, she looked deep into the lens for any sort of help. Instead, she slid backward. Andrew couldn't turn away.


The camera took a moment to adjust as Dana manipulated the focus until the tiny woman was perfectly in view at the back of her tongue. The light changed, and the woman slid further back. Her little feet pressed against Dana’s pink glistening pit. With one quick motion, her tongue rose, briefly obscuring the tiny woman. A soft wet 'gluck' emanated, accompanied by a horrific distant scream. When her tongue fell, the woman was halfway swallowed. She grasped wildly at the bumps on the massive tongue, her screams echoing into the wet maw. Andrew held his breath.


A small contented moan vibrated the camera, visibly shaking the woman stuck halfway. She was incoherent, a primal animalistic terror. Then her tongue moved again, and this time there was no scream. Just a wet squelch and the woman was gone. There was just an empty quivering throat, with no sign of what terrible thing had just happened. Andrew panicked, grasping desperately for the mouse. He clicked off the video as Dana withdrew the camera and blew a kiss. He needed to know this was some kind of CGI. Some other explanation than knowing that she just devoured someone. Whole. Alive.


Six Hundred Bucks

Word Count: 1689
Added: 03/25/2025
Updated: 04/05/2025

Andrew opened the file directory associated with the project. In it, dozens of videos lay with dates and times for titles. Whatever that was, it was dated a little more than an hour ago. He found the next most recent, dated the previous night. He clicked. He saw Dana looking into the screen, seated at the dining table adjusting herself and the lighting. This was a raw video. She took a deep breath and her face changed. A performative sultry grin took over.


"So tonight I'm here with Charles," she began, "and he's been very very bad. Say hello, Charles." The camera panned down, gripped by one of her free hands. A tiny man was in a bowl on the table, trying to scale the wall. "I hope he likes ice cream!" Dana smiled.


He watched her scoop two large dollops of vanilla ice cream into the bowl. Andrew couldn't take his eyes off, knowing that act alone could be deadly at that size. Tinies had awful temperate regulation. Dana had just committed a crime on video. No CGI, no tricks...


"If Charles can stay out of my spoon until I'm all done, he gets to live," she addressed the camera before looking down, "does that sound good, little one?" She didn't bother with a reply and simply began scooping. The camera panned closer, offering a closeup of the man trying to escape. Every ten seconds or so, the spoon would descend and threaten him. He scrambled away each time, barely. Andrew moused over the track bar and dragged it forward. The horror sped up, and he watched spoonful after spoonful disappear. He let go of the mouse when he saw the man leave the bowl. There was a brief closeup of him in the spoon, shivering and sluggish. 


"Awwww, he's cold! Let's help him out." Dana tilted the spoon over her outstretched tongue. Sticky sweet white strands of saliva hung from her teeth. The man could barely flail as he slid off into a slurry of her spit and ice cream. Andrew watched Dana's throat dance again, in a practiced motion she swallowed multiple times as a trickle of ice cream disappeared inside her. The man flowed along in the river of frozen dessert, flailing his arms uselessly. One gulp after another and then the next took him. Dana pulled the camera out of her mouth.


"Did I get him?" She asked herself or the audience. She moved her tongue around her mouth, searching. Her eyes widened. "I didn't even feel him! Must have been the cold. Oh well." Andrew clicked the player off. This wasn't happening. This was demented. Dana wouldn't do that. She-


The shower in the main bedroom shut off. She would be walking out momentarily. Andrew looked around the desktop, trying to find some other evidence that would contradict his eyes. Something that would tell him that Dana doesn't just eat people for cash. He minimized the editor and found a webpage open. It was some kind of pay-per-view site. Were these the people asking her to do this fucked up stuff? He clicked onto the message center, and read back the past few days. She'd been flirting with maybe a dozen people or more. Pictures of tinies in various states of duress. Someone paid her $300 to eat Charles with the ice cream. The request was very specific, and there were heart reactions on her ice cream video. A new notification appeared at the top. He clicked it.


Hey I really liked when you did that pillcam with the businessman. I know it's late notice but could I get another one of those? I can send another $550 plus $50 for the short notice. Make it really rough for them <3


Andrew felt like he was going to throw up. All those missing people, and here Dana was disposing of them like leftovers. He wondered how many she'd eaten. When did she turn into this... monster? Andrew heard her in the next room. She was outside, done with her shower. She couldn't see him here, who even was she? He had to escape or feign ignorance. This needed to be reported. The wedding needed to be called off. His hands were shaking, he tried to return the open windows to their original state. He clicked haphazardly, fumbling the windows he was selecting. A different window opened, this one had a strange interface. He didn't have time to figure it out, he was clicking as fast as he could and hoped to stand up and play dumb any moment now. He accidentally clicked some other button on the interface, right before closing it. Everything looked correct, but the laptop began to whir as the fans powered on.


Andrew got up, unsure of what program he just initiated. The desktop looked correct, it would have to do. He got up and tried to compose himself. She was going to walk in any-


A blinding flash emanated from one of the cameras on the desk. It felt like someone had just taken his picture, but the flash intensity was way too high. He felt red-hot and tried to leave the room but couldn't see. He tripped and hit the carpet. Andrew tried to reach out for the bed to lift himself but his limbs felt like jelly and he felt no structure beside him. Everything was black, and he groped around for something. Nothing came, then he must have been turned around. Then the floor began to shake, rhythmic quakes increasing in intensity. His blackened vision became blurry, then he could see shapes moving. It was Dana. He was on the ground. She was... walking towards him but everything was terribly out of proportion. He felt like he was looking through a camera lens, he felt sick. Dana walked into the room, wearing grey sweatpants and an oversized pink cut-off sweater. Her bare midriff was still a little red from the hot shower. The distance to the hallway seemed wrong, she was too far away... or the floor was too low?


Dana always looked young, sometimes being confused for Bianca’s sister by some of their friends. She adored those mixups. Her tanned skin was smooth and toned. Her abdominal muscles were visible just slightly below her sweater. Even at these strange proportions, her muscles moved with grace and her brunette hair swayed gently seemingly miles above in her ponytail. Andrew was taken aback by her terrible freshly-cleaned beauty, transfixed in a daze. She was enormous, or rather he was tiny. As she walked, her bare feet caused a small quake. It seemed like she was a mountain, slim and silky. Andrew realized what he had accidentally done.


Somehow Dana had aquired a device only licensed for government officials. He was shrunk. Reduced to the same size as the people he saw in the videos. The same size as the small woman digesting inside her at this very moment. This wasn't happening, this shouldn't be something she was capable of. All he could do was watch as she came closer, her footfalls causing him to vibrate in the carpet fibers. He was out in the open. He hoped whatever Dana had become, that she would forgive his snooping. He would tell her he didn't see anything. He would tell her about the fight with Bianca. As Dana walked into the office all he could think about were the horrible crimes he just watched her commit.


He could do nothing as she walked right up to him, her eyes locked onto the small squirming dot on her floor. She stopped and stood over him, her still-glistening dark brown ponytail hanging down. 


"Looks like I've got a survivor. How did I forget one?" She mused to herself as she reached for him. Andrew was still sluggish from the transformation and barely put up a fight against her powerful fingers. The fingernails had a light pink gloss and her whole hand smelled of coconut oil shampoo. He was unceremoniously lifted, high into the sky. Dana's gentle hands pinched him uncaringly, and she walked to the desk. The sickening motion was too much, Andrew closed his eyes and cringed as he was swung left and right with the force of a car accident. Then he was tossed down onto the cold desk, the wood grains wide enough for him to lay comfortably.


"Oooo, new message. Huh." She mused to herself, reading the message Andrew had read just moments ago. Andrew tried to stand up, his wobbly legs barely supporting him.


"Dana! Hey I'm really sorry someth-AHH!" As he shouted, one finger came down like a felled tree and pinned him to the desk. The wind was knocked out of him, and he tried in vain to lift her fingertip from his chest. As he struggled, her finger began to rotate. She was clicking away and reading with her other hand with Andrew at the mercy of just one finger. She pushed him along the smooth wood, making a small circle and rotating his body like a fidget toy.


"Ugh! M- that hurts!" Andrew tried to communicate as he spun around.


"Looks like we have another pillcam. What do you say, little guy? Wanna take a swim?" She glanced at him and smiled, chuckling as he repeatedly tried to get up.


Andrew remembered that request. He remembered what happened to all of those people. His body went into overdrive, desperately screaming and begging to be heard as she continued to roll him around.


"Dana! It's me! I came ov- Agh! Bianca and I had a fight! Dana! Hey!" Her gaze shifted away, and her fingers paused for a moment. Curiosity flashed on her face as she clicked a few windows.


"Huh. Weird. Oh well." She must have noticed something different with her computer but ignored it. With a quick motion, she pinched him again, this time bringing him in close. She held him to her exposed tummy and sighed with satisfaction.


"I'm glad I found you, whoever you are. I was pretty sure I ate everyone from the tour bus but maybe one of you scurried away. I guess that's a good thing, you're gonna make momma six hundred bucks. Doesn't that sound nice?"


Money Shot

Word Count: 2420
Added: 03/25/2025
Updated: 04/05/2025

Dana pressed Andrew to her abdomen, squeezing the air from him. Her soft skin gave way just enough as her fingers held him fast. She was so unbelievably warm, and her scent reminded him of countless hugs he'd received from her in the past. Now everything was wrong, twisted into a nightmare. He was hyperventilating, pressing and squirming against her soft belly.


"Dana! Please! It's me! Drew! Bianca’s Drew!" He managed to get out.


"Thankfully I still have a pillcam." She said aloud to herself.


"You- you're not-" Andrew's cries for her went silent as a terrible gurgle emanated from within her. A deep and slow rumble like distant thunder, vibrating his bones and freezing him to the core.


"I think that means we have a vacancy." She said flatly.


Andrew redoubled his efforts, kicking and punching. He was getting tired but he couldn't bear what was going to happen next. Was Dana really this cruel? Swallowing someone she didn't even know, or thought she didn't know? He wondered if he even knew her, or what she'd do if she did recognize him. It didn't matter. He wasn't about to wind up as some torture porn for a stranger. This was his Dana, kind and sweet. She had to see him. She had to see reason.


"Wait right here," she said as she placed him back on the desk. He tumbled over and this time sprung to his feet. He looked around, seeing only a sheer death drop on all sides. Then he saw the mouse. Dana leaned over, her hands reaching under the desk and her face disappearing from view. Andrew sprinted towards the mouse, hoping beyond hope he could push it to a photo album on the desktop.


"Where did I put it..." she wondered aloud.


Andrew reached the mouse, but could barely keep on moving. His body was being pushed to the limit. He tried pressing the mouse along the mousepad, checking for movement on the screen. The pointer barely budged. He shoved again. Success! The pointer was hovering over the file browser bookmarked at the bottom of the screen. Now he just needed to click...


"Ah! Finally. OK, Who's ready to take the plunge?" Dana rose in her chair, pill between her fingers about the size of Andrew. Her eyes caught movement, he was trying to climb the left click. His weight wasn't enough to press it down.


"Woah, there little one. Are you trying to check your email?" She giggled, gently prying him from the mouspad. Andrew could barely move, his chest heaving in and out as he tried to catch his breath. Her fingers kept him in place, pinched gently. On the screen was a blurry video of her fingers.


"Don't worry, it's all over now."


"No! Wait! Please. I... Dana... It's me..." Andrew said between ragged breaths.


"Oh, I know, little one" She cooed, "I know. Wave to the camera for me." She held the pill next to him with her other hand. Andrew looked into the lens beyond the glass. His terrified face appeared on the laptop preview. He screamed as hard as he could;


"Stop! It's me! It's Drew!"


"No sound, sweetie. I know, it's a shame. Maybe the next model."


A notification appeared on the screen accompanied by a small 'ding' sound. Andrew watched, his voice hoarse as Dana clicked on the message. Andrew read along with her.


Great! Thanks for getting back to me so soon. Another hundred if you can make him cum before swallowing ;)


"Good news! You get to have a little fun before you go."


Andrew was bright red, knowing full well Dana’s intent. He had seen her tie a cherry stem in her mouth and had seen people disappear behind that tongue. He regretted having fantasies about her in the past, just innocent passing daydreams. Who could blame him? She placed the pill on the desk and expertly undressed him. Her smooth fingers slid off his clothes with ease, despite his protests.


"No no no no! Dana no no! Dana!" 


"You're lucky, you know. One last comfort. Plus it makes it a lot easier to get you down. Really takes the fight out, you know?"


Andrew was naked and cold, already shivering. Her warm fingers wasted no time in rubbing his crotch, as she clicked onto a few more messages. His body reacted involuntarily, and he began to grow hard under her fingertip. Part of him wanted it. 


"Somebody's excited to be eaten!" She said, smiling but still reading the screen.


"Dana! Don't eat me! It's Drew! Please listen! Fuck! Stop touching me!"


"Alright, we're all set." She clicked back to the pillcam and looked at him. "Oh, you poor thing. You're shivering. Let me help you. It will feel good, I promise."


She leaned forward with her tongue hanging down, pressing him along her taste buds and coating him in a thick layer of saliva. 


"See? It's nice in there. Now put on a good show."


She lifted him upwards, holding him above her devious smile. Andrew witnessed what so many others did. Her face changed, and she transformed into her persona.


"Hey there cuties. Look what I have." She held him in front of the lens. His naked cock, hard and wet with spit on full display. "We have a straggler." She made a pouty face.


"Dana! No! Stop! Please! Someone tell her! I'm her daughter’s fiance! I'm Drew!"


"You know what we do with stragglers. Oh, but I have a surprise. One of my admirers has a special request. You get to follow along the journey."


She held the pillcam to the camera and then placed it onto her tongue.


"No no no! No! No! Dana! Don't eat me don't fucking eat me!"


"But before we say goodbye, I also have a nice sendoff. I hope you enjoy."


Andrew shuddered as Dana's mouth hung open wide, a near duplication of the horrific scene that he already had to witness. She was looking at the camera, making sure to get the best lighting for his execution. Her mouth was equal parts terrifying and inviting, her spit on his body was now cold and he felt like ice was going to penetrate his skin. Her breath washed over him and her throat danced, ready to receive. She dropped him, and in the freefall, he only managed a short yelp before landing on her plush tongue.


His senses were overwhelmed. The cold melted away instantly on her tongue, her saliva envigorated his naked flesh. The fall felt like more than thirty feet but her tongue braced the fall. For a moment the surreal humid landscape was still. Quivering, Andrew looked up to see his gigantic yet delicate fingers positioning the camera. Her soft pretty hands he’d come to know so well now poised to capture his lowest moment. His breath turned to deep ragged heaves as he looked around at the impossibility of it all. Her teeth surrounded him and her tongue gently pulsed as she made preparations to film. The laptop screen in the distance seemed like the jumbotron to a stadium. Her slick tongue was the field of a deadly arena, and he was the only player. His face appeared on the screen, tears and drool dripping from his chin. A second screen appeared with another angle, his neck slowly turned to see the pillcam lying against her incisor. Then the world shifted under him, and he slid along the center divet of her tongue towards her throat. She was getting comfortable.


A slow warm breeze rose from behind him, accompanied by her soft ethereal voice.

“Ahhhhhh~”

Her vocal cords created a melodious sigh that echoed around him. He tried to scramble to his feet but everything was slick. His naked body slid easily, and he could not avoid rubbing his pelvis against her taste buds. The sickening feeling of her tasing his crotch didn’t dampen his body’s need for release, he was getting harder. His loins didn’t know the difference between a fight for survival and sex. His cock didn’t care that the spittle came from a woman trying to devour him. It was warm and wet. Andrew sobbed openly, eyes trying to track the exit as the sickening movement continued. Then things settled, and the camera leaned in. Dana was comfortably sitting in front of the screen and ready to begin.

First, her tongue lurched upwards and back, forcing him closer to her teeth. Andrew flailed his arms, worried that he’d smash into her lower incisors. At the last moment, the tongue dropped him into her lip. Flesh and saliva engulfed him from all angles as she slid her tongue around her lip, pinning him to the inner lining. He felt like he would explode, trying to scream but spit filled his mouth instead. He could taste her sickly sweet aroma and felt each bump on her tongue as the world went dark. He tried to grab onto anything to keep from spinning and found something smooth. The pillcam.

He held onto the pillcam for dear life, the small light illuminating the dark red hell around him. She began to rock her monstrous tongue rhythmically, trying to separate him from the pillcam as he cried.

“Dana! It’s me!” He managed to gasp, spitting out her thick saliva.

Her tongue deftly scooped him as if in response, and carried them both to her molars. Andrew was reminded how expertly she tied a cherry stem in her mouth, as she’d occasionally demonstrate for dinner guests. He was embarrassed at the time to see her playful teasing. Something perverted in the back of his mind wanted to be that stem. Bianca hadn’t noticed. That same part of him was hard and pulsing. He felt powerless, and perhaps being recognized on the pillcam was his only escape. If she didn’t see him soon he would end up like the others.

He landed on the hard surface of her molar, still clutching the pillcam. He tried to find which end the camera was situated so he could press his face into it but it was useless. Her upper molars were coming down. Andrew hoped beyond hope that he could slide to the spot on the pill where she would see him. Dana had other plans. She used her molars to gently hold the pill while her tongue snapped him away. It was effortless. He was carried away to the other side of her mouth, then upwards. The roof of her mouth closed in from above and he found himself prone and cramped, his body unconciously enjoying the increased pressure.


Then her tongue began to rock. Back and forth, slowly and gently. He screamed, hoping his tiny voice would carry up through her soft palette.

“Dana, No! Stop! Please! I can’t! Fu- Fuck!” His cries fell short as he couldn’t help his arousal. The motion was just pleasurable enough, giving him just enough space to breathe. This was it. An extra hundred dollars just to taste him before he was sent to his death. She was going to milk him and then he was doomed. He had to resist, had to pull himself away from her relentless licks. He had to think of Bianca, and how disgusted she would be to know he came in her mom’s mouth.


“I’m Drew! Bianca’s Drew! This isn’t right! Dana! You have to stop! Please! Oh! Please! Oh! F… Oh!” He couldn’t help but moan, unable to resist her expert tongue even with his life on the line.

The rhythm stopped for just a moment and the pillcam slipped up with him at the roof of her mouth with a wet pop. She didn’t want to miss the money shot. Andrew pounded and kicked, screamed and cried. He tried to flip himself over to turn his cock away from the tantalizing taste buds. Dana did not relent, easily shimmying her tongue left and right to keep his manhood pumping downwards into her.

The rhythm picked up, the motion carrying him forward and back. He saw brief moments of light shine in from the front of her mouth, her lips curled into a smile. She was enjoying the challenge. Her tongue slid out over her teeth, then back. Faster and faster, he felt like he could not contain himself anymore. He shuddered and gasped, no longer screaming but moaning. Bianca would be horrified. He was disgusted with himself. A terrifying moan from below joined in, egging him on. Encouraging him to give in to her. He knew it would be over if he came, yet he edged closer and closer. He looked at the pill, tears in his eyes. He thought of Bianca.

“No! No- Ah, Ah, No! Dana! Pl, Ah, Ugngh.. N-No…I’m... Sorry... Bianca…”

He couldn’t control himself any longer, his body spasmed and he began to pump over and over into her mouth. The motion did not stop, ensuring wave after wave of creamy pleasure was squeezed from him. His cock danced and twitched, emptying him entirely. The rhythm slowed. It was done. Her tongue lowered, keeping him in a small pool of saliva and cum. Andrew was still in the throes of ecstasy, unable to move as his legs twitched uselessly. He tried to crawl out of his shame, away from his cum seeping into her taste buds.

“Ahh~”

A short, satisfied sigh. She had done it. Now there was only one thing left to do. The camera outside tilted, with Andrew’s sense of gravity along with it. His slow crawl on her tongue reversed and he began to slide towards her hungry throat. He tried to cling to her tongue but was so weak. He had been fighting for so long, and his body had betrayed him. Betrayed the love of his life. He had no fight left.

“Hah~”

She let out a little laugh, blowing up and out like a shockwave. His pathetic attempt to resist was amusing.

“No No Nnnoo No NO!” He protested

“Ah, haaaah~” She confirmed there was only one place for him to go.


Then her throat began to undulate. GULP. A large pool of saliva drained out. He slid further along, and a small dribble of his cum trailed in ahead. GULP. Dana eagerly swallowed his cum, even as more began to pool around the entrance to her body. Her throat danced with glee. Andrew could not slow his descent, her tongue now a cliff face as she looked straight up. The pillcam fell past him, landing in a pool of spit and cum just above the black hole to oblivion. GULP. She took that too, easily larger than him gone in an instant.

Her epiglottis passed overhead, and his feet touched the back of her throat. He looked straight up at the camera, pleading one last time.

“Dana-”

GULP


One-Way Trip

Word Count: 3097
Added: 03/25/2025
Updated: 04/05/2025

She embraced him one last time, her tongue using a practiced motion to slide him inside her. Her throat walls opened up like a trapdoor, and he disappeared. Then they closed back around him, tightly grasping him on all sides. He sobbed quietly, knowing it was all over. She had eaten him, swallowed whole like a pill. She was too busy entertaining her client to recognize him. He pounded in vain, weakly pressing his fists into her esophageal wall. He tried to put his feet into the ribbed walls to slop his descent but it was too slimy. A terrible smell wafted up from below.


“MMMMMMMMM~”

His bones rattled and his ears popped with the immense sound. He was sliding right past her vocal cords as she savored him. The ringing in his ears continued but he was able to hear her commenting on him as he slid further into her depths.

“I’m surprised he still has some fight left. Let’s watch what happens when…”

Her voice trailed off, becoming more difficult to hear as her heartbeat rose in volume. He felt the soft massage of her heart, something he used to understand. How could this kind woman be so cruel? How could the woman who loved him do something so monstrous? How could she have eaten him without even thinking about it? It didn’t matter, her heart was going to keep beating and his was broken. Soon to be consumed.


“This isn’t happening... This isn’t…”


His words came out wrong, his voice hoarse and shaky. He felt so alone, wrapped on all sides by Dana’s flesh. She was supposed to be a kind woman. She was supposed to love him. She welcomed him to her family. He fell deeper into her, as she waited patiently for him to drop inside. He wondered if this was what it was like for all of them. All those people… pushed down her throat like candy. His mind wandered to the website where someone asked for this. Someone asked her to swallow him alive, and they wanted to watch. His mind wandered more, wondering how he let himself cum into her mouth. Shame and despair swirled together until he could no longer think. Bianca would never forgive him.


He sobbed, deep heaving cries for himself, and for his fiance. She also cried for Dana. She was sick. He hoped to die quickly, not giving these awful people any more of a show. The nightmare persisted, and the bottom of her throat opened up to receive him. After a brief moment of freefall, he splashed down into Dana’s turbulent acid lake.

He didn’t have time to react, only struggle to stay upright in her acrid belly. The warm liquid was thick and foamy, and to his greatest despair, he could see it all. The pillcam lay upon the fleshy shore of her death chamber. He swam towards it, kicking at the chyme as his skin began to tingle. The yellowish fluid bubbled and popped, sloshing and squelching emanating from the sides. Andrew kicked and swam through the mess, desperate to escape. 


He made it to safety, placing his hands on a fleshy ridge and lifting himself from the corrosive fluid. The pillcam was twenty feet away… or was it a few inches? It was silently recording his struggle, illuminating her stomach for the paying client. He heard Dana’s voice from far away above, muffled through her body.


“There he is. What a trooper.”

“Dana! Fuck!”

“See that! He can hear me. Too bad there’s no audio. How are you hanging in there, little one?”

Andrew stood on a stomach ridge, stricken with heartache. The oppressive heat and thick noxious air inside her was bad enough but she was filming him. His skin was already spongy and he was exhausted from fighting off her tongue. He wasn’t sure if he had the energy left, but needed to get to that pillcam. She didn’t have anything else to look at, maybe if she saw his face then she could throw up. He might be able to survive his her insides. He looked at the pill and could only shake his head. It was too far. He fell to his knees, the soft gooey flesh under him sinking just a little as he moved.


“Awww. Giving up? Poor little guy got tuckered out in my mouth. I don’t blame him.”

Her sing-song voice cut through his despair. This wasn’t how he was going to die. He needed Dana to see him. He needed to see Bianca again. He needed to apologize for their argument and tell the world the horrible things this woman had done. He stood and started to lurch towards the pillcam. There was a bit of stomach tissue that rose above the foamy acid, some ridges which he could cling to. He walked along her stomach wall, careful not to slip into her boiling fluid below.

“That’s ya go. Let’s have a closer look. Tell you what, why don’t we play a little game?” 


Andrew tried to ignore her. Her voice almost sounded like thunder, cascading down around him through the constant din of sloshing and gurgling. Her heartbeat was faintly present in his feet as he walked, pulsing from far above. He looked up at the pillcam. It was still so far. He was about to take another step, but the whole chamber shuddered. He yelped, trying to hold onto one of her undulating ridges to avoid failing. The stomach acid churned and sloshed as everything went sideways briefly. Darkness fell as acid covered the pillcam’s operating light.

Acid rained from above as he gripped onto her stomach walls. His feet hung down, and her hungry fluids lapped up at him. Then the tumble reversed, and he was flung into her. He lost his grip but managed to barely avoid sliding off.

“Oop, sorry. I needed to get comfy.” The sarcasm carried through the sloshing.

Andrew couldn’t believe that motion merely came from her adjusting herself. This wasn’t happening. He wiped the stinging fluid from his face and eyes. Then he looked around for the pillcam. Thankfully it had only moved a little. He was somehow grateful that the sadistic camera was heavier than he was. He tried to get up but his hand touched something solid. He immediately recoiled, finding a partially-digested skeleton washed up along her stomach wall like a piece of driftwood. Still intact, with muscle and sinew holding it together. Andrew gasped and screamed, realizing this was what was left of the woman before him. Dissolved like a piece of meat. Energy for her toned body. Her hair and skin were gone, mixed into the hot thick pool.

“Oh, looks like you found the contestant from the last game. She was a real fighter.”

The skeletal visage of the woman hung gaunt and bleeding, some flesh still undigested. It almost looked like she was screaming, locked in an eternal cry for help that went ignored as Dana took a shower. Andrew felt he was staring into the eyes of death itself, fully grasping the destructive power of the woman who consumed him. Her body would soon claim what was left, and he would become another victim in her twisted video library.


Andrew scrambled away, trying to find some corner within Dana to sob. He found no relief, no waking up from this nightmare. He began to beg, hoarse desperate wails into her flesh.

“Da- Dana. Help me. Let me out! Please!”

“There there. I’ll tell you what, you win the game and I’ll let you out. A non-stop ticket out of Dana-town. What do you say?”

Andrew looked up, staring at the pill knowing Dana’s sultry eyes were on the other side. He stood and nodded. This was it, this was his chance!

“Good boy. Now, it will be simple. Reach the pill, and you win. Got it?”

Andrew’s eyes widened, and he took off as fast as he could manage. His legs burned, and when he looked down to choose his footing he noticed blood. He was already melting away inside her. He dared not look down, knowing parts of him were already being recycled.

“That’s right, little one. Come to mamma. Let me see that little face.”

Andrew’s every sinew burned but he fought through the disgust and hopelessness. Dana was some kind of terrible monster but at least even she took pity on him now. He thought of how things used to be, of how sweet she was. How Bianca was a reflection of her love. Or at least how loving he thought she was. He had no idea how long this had been going on. He looked around, wondering how many people saw this place before she claimed their lives. He needed to escape for them. To stop her from doing this to anyone else. He steeled himself against the terrible haze of rising heat wafting from below, and he did not turn back to look upon the poor woman who was screaming in here just a few hours ago.

He was almost halfway, sliding along the small ridge just above oblivion. The dim light of the camera illuminated more of his surroundings. The pink walls glistened, and he could feel the occasional dribble of acid being secreted. Small trickles of stinging fluid clung to his hands and feet, dripping into the pool.

Suddenly the pink walls shuddered, and violently undulated. It felt like an earthquake, and thunderous squelching erupted all around him. Her stomach was growling like an angry beast, quivering and desperate. She was hungry for him. Her body wanted him, another morsel to add to the collection of souls dissolved within. The rumbling died down, but large streams of acid began to run down the walls. He had to let go, the stinging turning to a red-hot burn in his fingers. He looked at his palms, bloody and raw as if by friction. He stood carefully still, his feet aching and burning as he tried not to touch anything else.


He felt he was almost through it when a quick jolt slapped him against her stomach wall. It burned but he was unable to push himself off, the movement continuing into a back-and-forth rocking which threatened to toss him in. A strange sound echoed from above. It was Dana’s voice, in short, melodic bursts. She was laughing. He looked at the pillcam, incredulous that his predicament was amusing.

“Heh, Heh.. Ahh. Sorry. You just look so sad. It’s cute.”


Andrew tried to cry, to say anything, but his voice caught in his throat. There was nothing left to say. He needed to reach the pillcam now or he was going to die, perishing within Dana’s body while she laughed about it. He tried to walk but slipped. She began to laugh again, gently rocking him as he struggled to right himself.

“Here, let me help.” She added, still laughing.


Andrew didn’t know what that could possibly mean but did not wait to find out. Without standing, he started to slide along her stomach wall. Pulling himself along his belly, he began to feel her juices work on him. It started with a tingling, and he knew what came next. If he wasn’t out soon the acid would be pouring into him. He crawled forward, inching along, and leaving a small trail of blood in his wake. The blood mixed with the rest, turning the yellow-brown liquid dark red near the edge. He felt like he was going to make it, going to finally show her what she had done. What she had done to so many others.


There was a loud splash in the center of the lake which made Andrew recoil, holding desperately to anything he could despite the burning. He dared a look and discovered a torrent of liquid pouring in from the opening he fell through. She had drank something, and the torrent of liquid came through in massive dark waves. The smell was thick and unmistakable. Red wine. Andrew panicked, realizing that the level of the acid was rising dramatically. The mixture now smelled deeply of wine and was dark red. His mind reeled, realizing there was nowhere else to go. He started walking, no longer feeling his legs. The liquid rose to meet him, up past his calves and then to his waist. He fell, sliding into her. The pillcam was so close, still hanging just barely at the ridge. He just needed to swim. The wine burned his senses but was mercifully diluting the acid. 


He could almost reach it, kicking as hard as he could to rise up out of her hungry abyss. The waves began to rock back and forth as she started to laugh again, seeing his hand so close and yet just out of reach. A deep belly laugh rocked the pill out into the foamy liquid. The pill began to slowly sink, he was about to grab onto it but gravity violently changed direction. Her stomach turned over, tossing him away from the pillcam and back to the far ridge. He landed with a wet splat and slid down in a mess of red fluid. The pill landed nearby, almost arm’s length. the light indicating Dana’s sadistic gaze. Her deadly waters lapped at his sides.

“Ooooh, so close.” More sarcasm, and yet more laughing. A simple rotation of her torso was enough to toss him around like a boat in a storm.


Spitting and coughing up wine, Andrew sat up. He willed his legs to move but they didn’t budge. He swung his arms around and lifted his torso away from the edge. He slid into the pill, not from the effort but by using the gentle rocking of Dana’s continued chuckles. He grasped the pill, smearing it red. He wondered how much was blood and how much was wine.

“Oh yay! You made it! Hey, little guyyy~” She cooed from above, congratulating him.


Andrew tried to smile. He did it, he was looking directly into the camera and wiped his face. More red, this time definitely blood.

“Dana? Dana! It’s me!” His voice wasn’t his own, some twisted cry of a deranged animal. He stared into the pill, then looked up. He waited for some sign of recognition. 


“Well, as promised, you get to leave! Isn’t that nice?” Her demeanor was unchanged.


Andrew wiped the pill and leaned in close, catching a sight of his reflection. His face was swollen and bloody, worn away nearly down to the muscle. He looked like a medical research project, and he didn’t even recognize himself.


“Well, you earned it!” Her voice cracked, her belly sloshing around agin in a deep belly laugh. She took a deep breath, then sighed. “Just hop right in and your journey will begin.” She erupted into a fit of laughter which rocked Andrew off the ledge. He clutched the pill, screaming as he splashed down.


“No! You said! Agh!”

“Oh, I know. I promised you a one-way trip. It’s time. You’ll be let out before you know it.”

Andrew struggled to stay afloat, barely able to swim as the pill dragged him down. He couldn’t reach her stomach walls. He could only look desperately into the camera and try to plead with her. His voice failed, acid melting away his ability to speak.

“Poor thing. You’re part of me now. Relax and let my body do the rest. You put up a good fight, I’m so proud of you.”

Andrew wanted to fight but his body was unresponsive. His arms stopped working, the pain seared into his midsection. He could no longer do anything but sink into her. He disappeared below her turbulent waves, and the light of the pillcam followed. Andrew felt like he was drifting through hot coals, then just warm ones. He was dissolving away, and found the pillcam descending. It landed at the bottom, and he floated nearby. He could feel the gentle rocking of Dana’s continued laughter, the light illuminating his diminishing body. A muscle at the bottom opened up just a bit, and sucked him inside.


The environment was suddenly different, less volatile. He had escaped her stomach, sinking deeper and deeper into her depths. Her body had stripped him of almost everything, but she wasn’t done. The pillcam cast very dim light into her intestines, and after free-floating for a moment Andrew felt tiny fleshy appendages stroke him gently. He turned to look at the villi, reaching out to him. One of the pink fingers made contact with his arm, and snipped off a small chunk. Andrew spun, trying to swim back to retrieve what was taken. The slow current carried him onwards, and he realized the insane impossibility of resistance. There was no escape, no way he could swim through her and live. He briefly thought that maybe he could survive the journey, but knew that to be false. Her mocking words cut him deeply. To think he almost agreed to be in the same family as this monster.


There was sickening movement again, but less violent than before. His downward descent turned sideways, and the current kept pushing him along. She was laying down, probably to fall asleep. She liked to nap after a glass of wine. Andrew tried to swim against the current, to grab the pill and convince her. If not for him but for some appeal to her humanity. He heard a distant contented sigh, barely audible. It was over. He spun around as another chunk of him was taken by her greedy intestines. As he struggled, small flecks of him dispersed into the bile. He was slowly disappearing, losing one fragment at a time.


The pill silently monitored his journey, he wondered if someone was still watching. He could not cry or scream, only shudder with despair. She had devoured him. Her intestines were picking him apart. A villi attached to his left thigh and the leg simply separated. He didn’t even feel it, his body mostly dissolved. He looked behind him at the pill, the light moving past his leg until he could not see it anymore. He closed his eyes, hoping for her appetite to finish him off soon. He knew he was already being absorbed and assimilated. His energy was spent, and whatever he had left would be given up to her. He hoped that Bianca would never find out that he came before she absorbed the rest of him.


What was left of Andrew rounded a bend in her small intestine. More and more tiny hungry fingers reached for him, taking their share of his body. He was being disassembled. Andrew’s flesh was no longer his. He was nothing, just food for the woman who he thought cared. He began to hallucinate visions of Bianca. It was warm. He let go.


Epilogue

Word Count: 752
Added: 03/25/2025
Updated: 04/05/2025

Dana Barone woke from a good sleep. She stretched and sighed. Slipping on her robe over her nude form, she walked to the window and opened the shutters. The dim light of dawn was well on the way. She walked to the kitchen, and started the instant coffee. Everything was quiet, and that was how she liked it. She checked her phone and found a few notifications. Just a few likes and comments from her side hustle. She was glad things were going so well, the extra funds were a huge help. She felt a little bad for the tinies that she took but mostly nobody really missed them. It was unfortunate, that things like that happened.

When you’re that small people will take advantage of you, that’s just life. Besides, most of the accounts asking for her to do all that were small themselves. She suspected they enjoyed being eaten or worse. It’s not like they have much else to look forward to. She wasn’t completely cruel about it either, making sure everyone had a little fun. The little guy last night surely enjoyed himself, and who wouldn’t enjoy some solo time in her mouth? She checked herself out in the mirror, running her tongue across her teeth. Then she gathered her coffee and went to the office.


Luckily, when things were a little slow she could always make her own work. In the office, she admired the new insta-shrink model she was able to pick up from a salvage yard. That was a real game-changer. No more needing to wait for someone to wander into the tiny house. Tiny people weren’t the only ones who could disappear. People get lost all the time, and it was hard to turn down a few hundred dollars. She patted her belly gently. It was time to check the footage.


She sat and booted up her computer. The pillcam was still connected, broadcasting from somewhere in her large intestine. The battery life on those was really phenomenal. The little guy was gone, probably dissolved hours ago. She turned off the recording and closed the viewing window. The raw footage saved and she loaded it into the scene builder with her overlays. She skipped around the footage, having a quick look. The lighting was good, and the view of her stomach looked great. She reversed the video, skipping back to the part the client requested. She resumed the video and it began to play. The little one was struggling, begging, and losing himself on her tongue. She remembered his taste, making a sucking sound with her lips.

Then her face froze. She paused the video, the freeze frame showing the terrified face of the little one as he came. His eyes were a mixture of despair and ecstasy. But his face… No that was impossible. She rewound the footage. There he was. Andrew, clear as day. Her daughter’s fiance. A kind young man. Her eyes grew wide and her hands began to shake. She shook her head, it must have been someone who looked like him. She played it again, this time he was held up next to her face. He was screaming. She turned up the audio. In between her mocking taunts she heard his voice. Faint and desperate.

"Dana! No! Stop! Please! Someone tell her! I'm her daughter’s fiance! I'm Drew!"

Her blood froze. This was impossible. She rolled the footage forward, unable to believe what she had done. She gripped her stomach, which was starting to turn. She paused the video when he lay at the back of her throat. She played it again, dreading what she already knew would come next.


His tiny body was laying in a pool of spit and cum. His pleading eyes looked directly into the camera. She placed her hand over her mouth.


“Dana-”


He was cut off. She watched him disappear. She ate him. Not just eaten, but… Her mind raced. Tears streamed down her face as she dialed his cell. This wasn’t real. This was fake. Her other hand attempted to stop the video but she was shaking so much. The video began to fast-forward at 3x speed. The line rang and rang. She looked down and noticed a tiny pair of pants lying next to her keyboard. She had discarded his clothes carelessly last night before drinking. There was a small light coming from the front pocket. His voicemail answered, and she watched him dissolve on the screen with wide terror in her eyes.

“Hey there! It’s Drew. Leave a message!”

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